The Return of Black Beauty
Some kids eat dodgy burgers at a BBQ and get food poisoning.
Response from A. B. Toir Agency: Good idea but you've butchered it in execution.
Pirates vs. Bankers
A bunch of smelly, boozed up, cut-throat, immoral, bastards get murdered by some pirates.
Response from Stan Morley: A bit obvious.
Honk if you're Horny
The adventure of a bull called Horny brought up by geese. When the bull is taken to the slaughter house the geese track him down by his unique bull-goose honk and rescue him, sending a horse to be slaughtered in his place.
Response from Wings and Hoof Associates: Completely unbelievable. As if anyone could mistake a horse for a bull.
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